Morgan Breese’s Reviews > Bullyville > Status Update
Morgan Breese
is 94% done
If I chose for my author to improve something in this book I would pick to improve the flow of this book. What I mean by that is I think there should be more events happening because it would make it alot more fun for the reader because they could picture themselves in that characters shoes.Also another thing I would improve is the vocabulary because it makes the book more strong.So that's what I would improve.
— May 29, 2014 09:46AM
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Morgan Breese
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I think that if my character were to go to college I think that they would major in Counseling.I think that because this book is mainly about bullying and when there is bullying guidance counselors are the ones that ususally end up dealing with the problem. My main character has been bullied before so he can relate to some of the problems and experiences. So that is what I think my main character would major in.
— Jun 02, 2014 09:38AM
Morgan Breese
is 94% done
I think if the author renamed this book it could be something like something to do with respect. I think that because bullying has to do with treating others how you want to be treated and that is a respect king of thing. One last reason I would name it something like that is because having respect is something that every person should have.
— May 28, 2014 09:52AM
Morgan Breese
is 94% done
I think if the author renamed this book it could be something like something to do with respect. I think that because bullying has to do with treating others how you want to be treated and that is a respect king of thing. One last reason I would name it something like that is because having respect is something that every person should have.
— May 28, 2014 09:52AM
Morgan Breese
is 94% done
I think if the author renamed this book it could be something like something to do with respect. I think that because bullying has to do with treating others how you want to be treated and that is a respect king of thing. One last reason I would name it something like that is because having respect is something that every person should have.
— May 28, 2014 09:52AM
Morgan Breese
is on page 71 of 260
I think that if my character had catch phrase it would be stop bullying and treat others how you want to be treated. I think that it would be that because this book is clearly about bullying. Also another reason why that would be his catch phrase is because bullying is something that shouldn't happen and he enforces that. So that is what I think my main characters catch phrase would be.
— May 27, 2014 09:51AM
Morgan Breese
is on page 49 of 260
If my character would go on vacation I think it would be somewhere like Jamaica. I think that my character would go there because the people there are very nice and he always wanted to go somewhere tropical.Another reason why my character would go there is because he likes to do things that most people wouldn't do like something with the ocean. So that is where I think my character would go on vacation.
— May 23, 2014 09:45AM
Morgan Breese
is on page 27 of 260
If my book were a movie I think that it would be rated PG13. I think that it would be rated that because this book has some bullying and as a younger kid you might not understand what it does to a person that gets bullied and more. Sometimes when people get bullied it really brings them down and the person who is bullying doesn't understand what he/ she has done. So this is what I think my book would be rated.
— May 22, 2014 09:35AM

