colleen the convivial curmudgeon’s Reviews > The Aviary > Status Update
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So, I've pretty much figured this book out, which is disappointing. Also, the voice and dialogue are really unnatural.
— May 27, 2014 06:50PM
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colleen the convivial curmudgeon
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So, the thing I thought was going to be the big reveal which I'd figured out last night is *not* the big reveal, and they've figured it out. So yay!
The dialogue is still really unnatural, though, especially for kids. I mean, I know it's trying to evoke the whole "olde timey talking" thing, but it's just kinda awkward.
— May 28, 2014 07:13AM
The dialogue is still really unnatural, though, especially for kids. I mean, I know it's trying to evoke the whole "olde timey talking" thing, but it's just kinda awkward.
