Chris’s Reviews > Wild: From Lost to Found on the Pacific Crest Trail > Status Update

I'm in ch. 3, she's not even on the trail yet and I'm already wincing. Four of the first five paragraphs of this chapter start with "I." Fourteen consecutive sentences in a row begin with "There was..." as she described the backpack contents. Did she not use an editor?Fine if this is a stylistic tool to create the sense of her drudging step-after-step progress on the trail, but we're in her motel, for crying out loud