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Finally some decent action sequences. These weren't as confusing as the dialogue can be occasionally.

Finding this very confusing. Can't separate out the secondary characters and there's nothing of note between the main characters. They've been at this House Party for a week already. The author has obviously done a lot of research on events of the time period but forgets that the reader might not know as much as she does, so characters have conversations that are essentially meaningless to the reader and the plot.