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The place in my book is the football field. This symbolized hard work because he spend most of his time working harder. The time of when he works on the field is early. This means that he is determined to get better.The color that is used alot is red. This is used becuase the boy has a crush on a girl that also plays football. And their teams have to play against each other so the color may change as the game goes on

Right now the most important thing in the book is the comparisons that I can make. I went to nationals for football and this football book is about a nationals team that played seven on seven. So both the book and real life are really alike.

on page 123 ty spilled a slushie on a young girls white dress and he got blamed for it when realy a nfl enemy stepped on his foot so that e would spill it. Also they are in the 7 on 7 national tournament and they have won tehir first game because of ty's game winning catch.

the theme right now is Miami. Right now ty dumped a red drink on a famous girls white dress. And now his older brother thane is mad because it is making him look bad.

If I were to change something in the book was that they should have made the main characters brother be more active in the book because in the beginning he was in it and I as really into it but then when he wasnt in it anmore in the middle is became a little bit boring,

I think that this book would make a great movie. I love to watch sport movies and this wouod make a great movie. The movie would need good actors to make it all come together