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Defiantly a book written by a male as clearly indicated when he mentions the dude rapes the girl and then immediately after finding out it happened kisses the girl (and writes it that she kisses the guy back). First, there’s a major story that’s being ignored for this needless side drama to be included. Second, while women are sexual after an attack this was written so bullishly.
— Jan 09, 2022 05:12AM
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Jude Samson
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This guy must be a crap cop because he does one or two extremely basic things and then just throws his hands up saying he exhausted every method. Actually it’s just one more example of lazy writing. This could have been used to build a great deal of tension for the reader as he tries to find different things without it becoming boringly repetitive but the writer failed to even bother.
— Jan 09, 2022 05:14AM
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It’s hard to write a Groundhog Day without being boring - even harder when you have a lackluster skill of the language, which is the case here. Almost all guides on how to write a good and exciting book are thrown out or just ignored. Boring descriptions that are unimportant. Sooooo much telling and very little showing.
— Jan 09, 2022 05:10AM
