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Not nearly at all what I expected. I hope it gets better soon
— May 19, 2014 08:24PM
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Beth
is on page 78 of 452
Very slow going with this one. Having a hard time getting into it. I know they tell writers to show, not tell; but it seems like this one is going overboard on the showing. Like overly descriptive. I can't really connect with the MC, either. I don't understand the thing with the rat. And how it only seems to appear at random times when something needs to happen.
— Apr 29, 2014 08:14PM
