♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣’s Reviews > Picks & Pucks > Status Update
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Well that was hot, tender and hopefully consistent with the characters. The writing is better than anything else up to this point, too.
— May 05, 2014 06:38PM
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♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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Well, hell. I mean... jesus fucking hell. Fuckin' got me. Fuck.
— May 07, 2014 06:59PM
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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It may have been too perfectly corny a few pages ago, but now there are tears because that was real.
— May 07, 2014 06:49PM
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
is 78% done
That was overly dramatic but I find myself not being able to keep from caring about Justin and CJ.
— May 06, 2014 07:54PM
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
is 61% done
Well shit, that was sweet, hot, quick and honest. They've gotten to me!
— May 06, 2014 06:45PM
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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So, this has improved, continually. I like Justin and CJ, definitely Eli, and even Danny. Some sweet (I'm actually not gagging lol), some serious and def odd with the "invisible" personal demons.
— May 06, 2014 05:14AM
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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I'm picturing gremlins surrounding this guy. The word "demons" has been used like 40 times so far. Working to keep an open mind.
— May 05, 2014 05:08AM
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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Ok, Dani, keep your literary fingers crossed for me.
— May 04, 2014 07:29PM
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May 05, 2014 06:40PM
Oh, I'm glad you are reading this! I'll be watching for your opinion. Smooch!
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Gotta say, it was not looking good, especially with (view spoiler), but this was pretty well done and hope it continues.
WTF??? Well, I'll wait for your final thoughts... I just love the hockey boys!
Same here! I ice skated for years, love watching hockey in person and just love sports stories to begin with.And WTF is right lol. Gonna have to figure out a way to "review" that part. Keep your fingers crossed!
