Laura’s Reviews > Swearing Off Stars: A Novel > Status Update

It starts to take a rather unbelievable turn. I also cannot understand why the chapters focused on Scarlett's characters POV only amounts to two pages, while Lia's are in-depth. The shift in character focus seems undeveloped, IMO. If this is supposed to be about Lia's obsession with Scarlett, than just tell the story from her point of view, otherwise it feels like both should be fleshed out.

Big jumps in time. The flow feels off. The likable characters have become a little whiny and you want the story to just get to the point.

I enjoyed the first 33%, and suddenly it start making jumps and doesn't fill in details. Perhaps those will come into focus as I continue.

I do like the characters.