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Sally Ember
Sally Ember is 16% done
Flows well, interesting, good world-building. YA characters and setting. So far, enjoyable.
May 01, 2014 05:17AM
Open Minds (Mindjack, #1)

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Sally Ember
Sally Ember is 38% done
There is a fine line between showing the perseverating/obsessional nature of your protagonist or other characters and being repetitive to the point of boring your reader. I am treading the line often, myself, so I empathize with the problem for authors, esp. of YA lit. However. TOO MANY TIMES saying the same thing is, well, BORING. We get it. She feels X about Y. Her powers are Z. She feels Q about them. Move on.
May 02, 2014 04:45AM
Open Minds (Mindjack, #1)


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