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Lillian Francis
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Then and than. Two different words. Two different meanings.
— Apr 23, 2014 10:35AM
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Lillian Francis
is 55% done
Oh God. Now the other one is crying. Man up, you're meant to be a tough FBI agent.
— Apr 23, 2014 10:53AM
Lillian Francis
is 52% done
I don't need you to have a conversation with the other MC telling him word for word what I've just seen go down in the previous scene.
— Apr 23, 2014 10:47AM
Lillian Francis
is 25% done
Way too many differing POVs for my liking. It means the book loses some of its suspense.
— Apr 23, 2014 09:08AM
