Niyati Em’s Reviews > No Charm Intended > Status Update

Why would you discuss the case with the crafters you bring for a retreat? Why would you act all surprised if the police asks you to stay inside and stay safe?

This is an actual line,

"Why is anyone worried about you butting into police business"

Seriously? I honestly don't know why I'm reading at this point, just to probably find out who did it. Skimming is more like it

What the absolute %#@@! A person organizing a crafts retreat doesn't want to stop to chitchat with someone who paid to come to the retreat? The characters in this book are god awful honestly.

Ummm, the writing here is so bad. How does this book have such positive reviews? Both the characters are acting stupid!!

And it really feels like the first book and the second book were written by 2 different people. I honestly am NOT enjoying the 2 person POV here, especially since we're beginning to guess how the other person is behaving. It's a little grating to read. And Cora's reactions are just absurd. Literally.

I don't know, this is what happens when you have lead characters that lead with their hearts and not their heads, and not in a good way.

Quick read and I was just reminded on HOW bad it was that the author kept giving Jane's POV in the book and how that POV just didn't sit right with me.