Mike’s Reviews > If I Should Die Before I Wake > Status Update

Torture, torture, torture, torture, HEY ORCHESTRA, torture, torture, torture...

This is getting better, I gotta say. Although I miss the focus on Hilary.

I am very grateful for this roof above my head, and the running water in my toilet.

Man, I wish the Holocaust plot wasn't overshadowing the present plot so much. There are entire sections of the history that could easily be changed to third-person and put in a textbook.

This Holocaust stuff? Kinda feels like it's pulled out of a history book. Too clinical.

I'm really starting to like Hilary's voice. It was kinda cheesy at first, but it's rapidly improving.

I can't decide which story is less interesting, the Holocaust or the present-day. They're both pretty boring.

I guess I'm warming up to this. It's still not as good as I expected.

Oh, my god. This is so bad! But... but it's by the author of Crazy! NO! I WILL NOT ALLOW THIS!