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Mike
is 80% done
The characters are going down River A on the way to join River B.
Then somehow partway along they are going down River B on the way to join River A (the names have been switched).
And they appear to be rowing facing the wrong way (towards the bow), as well.
Just sloppy overall.
— Sep 20, 2021 12:52PM
Then somehow partway along they are going down River B on the way to join River A (the names have been switched).
And they appear to be rowing facing the wrong way (towards the bow), as well.
Just sloppy overall.
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Mike
is 60% done
Reading this as part of the Sword and Magic box set, but will rate and review separately here, since I probably won't read all the books in that set.
Commas are a problem (before the main verb, before "that," missing before terms of address, splicing together sentences). There are a few homonym errors, a dangling modifier, the usual stuff. Borderline spoiled protagonist (people help him for no real reason).
— Sep 19, 2021 12:49PM
Commas are a problem (before the main verb, before "that," missing before terms of address, splicing together sentences). There are a few homonym errors, a dangling modifier, the usual stuff. Borderline spoiled protagonist (people help him for no real reason).
