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Sherre Copeland is 60% done
Not too much better than earlier, but I'm going to stick with it.
Mar 14, 2014 11:05AM
Coven

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Sherre Copeland is reading
I'm not sure how I feel about this one yet. It has a lot of random "pleasure" bits that don't make much sense to me yet and it just feels pretty slow. Though things are happening, there is very little dialogue and most of it's inside the speaker's head. The narrator isnt helping much either as she seems to be sort of choppy in her narration, pausing unnecessarily midsentence.
Mar 14, 2014 08:31AM
Coven


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