yaz’s Reviews > The Living Sea of Waking Dreams > Status Update

Much better. What’s up with those first few pages.

I am on page 1, PAGE ONE and I already feel like the dumbest person on the planet. WHY DO I FEEL LIKE IM READING A BUNCH OF WORDS THAT THE AUTHOR HAS VOMITED ON THE PAGE? Where are the punctuation marks, grammar, sentences? No? NO? What. am. I. reading.

How do people make sense out of this. Or am I just dumb?