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Deviki
is 60% done
3rd story was not bad. I liked this Duke and Thalia..... Ugh I love that she is a nerd lol. I also like that the story was not too concoct..... It was just that.... A simple love story. I know this is a collection of short stories so I can overlook that instalove..... The again they were friends for longer so all is cool.
— Sep 06, 2021 02:01AM
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Deviki
is 50% done
Wow the second story was a bore..... Everything was happening so positively..... There was absolutely no drama at all..... If I've not known this books involves interracial couple..... I would think Mary is white.... Why oh why did you had to make Thomas the good guy? Why can't he be the reason the last lady died.... Why can't he just be remorseful for what he did and be done with it....?
— Sep 05, 2021 06:47AM
Deviki
is on page 72
Just finished story 1 ......it was ok ....nothing really interesting happening, standard love story. Also why is it ok for men to take many lovers when he is sad but a lady always have to stay as pure and virgin for him to come crawling back???? Also it seem like suddenly her hearing impairment is forgotten.
— Sep 03, 2021 06:23PM
