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Aya
is 50% done
More stupidity - supposed Russian assassins capable of sneaking into target's room while ex-agent roommate slumbers in the same house, subdues target, trussing her up to die hanging from tree when it would have been less hassle to just cut her throat? Story is senselessly over-complicated.
— Aug 22, 2021 02:49PM
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Aya
is 51% done
More stupid inconsistency - miss capable former secret agent is not one for exercise?
— Aug 22, 2021 03:13PM
Aya
is 41% done
MC and former boss have a conversation over dinner about MC's roommate and suddenly realize that they've left said roommate alone at the house - no duh? This scene doesn't make any sense.
— Aug 22, 2021 02:22PM
Aya
is 37% done
MC's bright idea is to doctor a yearbook to prove her claims - as if there aren't any other copies in existence. ugh
— Aug 22, 2021 01:57PM
Aya
is 36% done
It's beyond unbelievable that Merry doesn't have a cover identity already in place. This feels like a cheap plot device.
— Aug 22, 2021 01:54PM
Aya
is 26% done
Weird scene where the idiot MC is admiring her former boss's flexing muscles to avoid getting beaned by a suitcase containing a dead body. Not to mention why did former boss aim for her in the first place? Humor fail due to nonsensical setup.
— Aug 22, 2021 01:41PM
Aya
is 22% done
In what world is putting an undercover agent on national news a good idea?! The first thing this book starts with is the main character's cover getting blown.
— Aug 22, 2021 01:38PM
