Veronica > Status Update

Definitely picked up the pace at the end. I was wondering what happen with Kristina. Then to hear she "sold out" was a bit heartbreaking. Also throughout I was curious as to what Rebekah thoughts really were/are as Stab adventures off. It would be cool to view her thoughts more. This is a late series if the Stan Turner mysteries. I'm considering starting from the beginning to read through the series.

"Martin stifled a laugh [directed question to Wells] Martin scowled at Kristina [Answers question]" Character confusion. I believe it is Wells who scowls at Kristina then proceeds to answer. The following sentence structure after the answer is back in the context of Martin.

I feel like Stan is giving out too much information to too many people.

"This left him dead in his tracts with no idea where to look next" Tracts should be tracks

"The last think I need is a snake slithering around the house" Think should be thing

"...I'll take whatever precautions are necessary to protect my myself and my family" delete the first "my"

"Why don't you come over to the hose this afternoon ..." hose should be house

Missing quotation marks "there's nothing for you to do up here' "

Goodreads lists 306 pages, my copy lists 353. (I believe my copy is an advanced edition) Page 46: "There organization is very sophisticated and well run" I believe "there" should be "their"