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The hero keeps referring to himself as "this man" and it's kind of annoying. Otherwise the story is okay.
— Oct 21, 2010 05:24AM
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Oh my what a cover! That's quite a skimpy loin cloth covering his Mighty Wang of Love!
— Oct 15, 2010 09:31AM
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Oct 21, 2010 08:16AM
Really? How odd!
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I think she is trying to make him sound "Indian" or something.