Sügr’s Reviews > Kidnappings in the Legendary Mine > Status Update

plot is very bad.

plot:
girl and cat go to park
ppl's kids gone missing in park
person tells girl clue for no reason
girl and cat go to kidnappers place
girl and cat save kids
girl and cat and kids escape
girls and cat got rewarded for saving kids
girl and cat is happy

end


beginning very long
middle very short
end is too long