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Kanoko
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Funny typo: curser instead of cursor.
Uhm, that might fly as a lame geek joke. You know: What do you call a computer geek who curses? A curser, ha-ha-ha.
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— Feb 10, 2014 10:08PM
Uhm, that might fly as a lame geek joke. You know: What do you call a computer geek who curses? A curser, ha-ha-ha.
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Kanoko
is 46% done
Oh my this is good. Slow start, but then it took off like a rocket after. Would benefit from a good edit, but otherwise really fantastic—and I'm only halfway in!
— Feb 10, 2014 08:09PM
Kanoko
is 16% done
Pretty unique so far. Language throws me off but not in a bad way.
The sexy stranger might be just that—sexy—for coming on strong (read: domineering ass). I'm not sure I agree with his taking charge of Darcy's hotel accommodation (with butler, at that) and doing some things without her say-so. I'd walk out on him, if I were Darcy. Well, maybe after the sex. Haha.
— Feb 10, 2014 04:11PM
The sexy stranger might be just that—sexy—for coming on strong (read: domineering ass). I'm not sure I agree with his taking charge of Darcy's hotel accommodation (with butler, at that) and doing some things without her say-so. I'd walk out on him, if I were Darcy. Well, maybe after the sex. Haha.
