Joe Kessler’s Reviews > The Spirit Thief > Status Update
Joe Kessler
is 38% done
1) Bad guy seems way overpowered. 2) If he could do this all along, why did he happen to wait till now?
— Jun 18, 2021 02:33PM
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Joe Kessler
is 62% done
"Not whom you were expecting?" Um, actually, I was completely expecting for the heroes to have to confront the Dragon before the Big Bad, myself. Not sure why this is supposed to be a surprise.
— Sep 05, 2021 02:27PM
Joe Kessler
is 39% done
"The king looked at her blankly. “An ensla-what?” “An enslaver,” Miranda repeated. When comprehension failed to dawn on the king’s face, she added, “A bad wizard.”"
This dude doesn't know the word enslaver?? He can't figure out what it means from context??
— Jun 19, 2021 06:42PM
This dude doesn't know the word enslaver?? He can't figure out what it means from context??
Joe Kessler
is 25% done
This is.... fine, but not really as clever as it thinks it is.
— Jun 14, 2021 02:23PM
