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Sweeto Makiko
is 99% done
Watch them dance and gush around my fingers.
There’s an old legend told about candles,
That if you blow one out, you get a wish.
I take a deep breath and blow them all out,
Fragile flames gone, and I don’t make a wish.
— Jun 03, 2021 02:25PM
There’s an old legend told about candles,
That if you blow one out, you get a wish.
I take a deep breath and blow them all out,
Fragile flames gone, and I don’t make a wish.
Sweeto Makiko
is 99% done
The high hits me and I’m made of glowing.
I can feel the light coursing through my veins.
The candles are no more than little stumps,
Mostly burned away and looking ancient.
I run my hand through the small, orange flames,
— Jun 03, 2021 02:25PM
I can feel the light coursing through my veins.
The candles are no more than little stumps,
Mostly burned away and looking ancient.
I run my hand through the small, orange flames,
Sweeto Makiko
is 95% done
And I feel like the only living soul
Here, like I’ve come to the Garden of Phos.
Some of them are definitely dying
Or dead. I step across breathless bodies,
Some with wrists slit, some just wasted away,
And a few hanging by rope from the trees
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
— Jun 03, 2021 02:24PM
Here, like I’ve come to the Garden of Phos.
Some of them are definitely dying
Or dead. I step across breathless bodies,
Some with wrists slit, some just wasted away,
And a few hanging by rope from the trees
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
Sweeto Makiko
is 86% done
Dante is in awe of the sky, the sun.
I am humbled by his humility.
He takes my hand, helps me over a fence,
And I’m wishing I knew what it was like
To feel anything except hot anger
Or this endless, freezing cold hollowness.
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
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— Jun 03, 2021 02:24PM
I am humbled by his humility.
He takes my hand, helps me over a fence,
And I’m wishing I knew what it was like
To feel anything except hot anger
Or this endless, freezing cold hollowness.
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
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Sweeto Makiko
is 84% done
Because people live out their lives content,
While the city around them gets darker.
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
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— Jun 03, 2021 02:22PM
While the city around them gets darker.
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
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Sweeto Makiko
is 80% done
What you’re saying is that our ancestors
Travelled seemingly endless distances
By, effectively, turning into light?’
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
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— Jun 03, 2021 02:21PM
Travelled seemingly endless distances
By, effectively, turning into light?’
Excerpt from: "Dark Star" by Oliver Langmead. Scribd.
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Sweeto Makiko
is 47% done
Fire is the destroyer, the great absence
It devours, turns brightness into blackness
— Jun 02, 2021 04:02PM
It devours, turns brightness into blackness

