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I don't know. There is just something about the writing in Lucy Monroe's recent contemporaries that bugs me. I can't put my finger on it though...
— Sep 28, 2010 09:58AM
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I think I'm going to dnf this book. I have no desire to pick it back up again. I have so much more I want to read...
— Oct 01, 2010 07:42PM
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Speaking of her nipples, "More like frozen raspberries than eraser nubs,..." Ah, how romantic. Eraser nubs. Just what I want to see in a love scene. LOL
— Sep 30, 2010 09:32AM
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It's sad but I like Kadin, the hero's soldier buddy, better than him. It's the old "I won't make the same mistake again so I'll continue to believe she's a traitor until I have proof positive" crap!
— Sep 29, 2010 09:47AM
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Sep 28, 2010 10:14AM
I always get so bothered when I can't figure out what exactly drives me nuts about someone's writing.
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Is it the endless circular conversations? That's what killed her books for me.
willaful wrote: "Is it the endless circular conversations? That's what killed her books for me."YES!!! Bingo! That's it exactly! You hit it on the head, willa! I knew it was something about the dialogue but it just wasn't coming to me.
It makes it so boring! It's like watching a tennis match. Back and forth, back and forth, back and forth. *no offense to any lovers of tennis* =)
ETA: If something doesn't stand out about this one that overcomes the circular conversations, as you call them, willa, I'm going to have to quit reading them. Waste. of. time.
Ah, yes, I've noticed that too. ^^' Hopefully, she eases up on that...
