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Kendra Herlig
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** SPOILER ALERT ** The whole scene where she gets taken to the bar... very strange. And who didn’t see the whole hamburger being drugged. Why would she even stay there? Doesn’t seem in character and seems like a dumb plot twist.
— May 29, 2021 04:21AM
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Kendra Herlig
is 70% done
Ok. The bear cave? Seriously strange what the author thinks we will believe.
— May 31, 2021 07:15PM
Kendra Herlig
is 53% done
What was the scene with the horses escaping the parade all about? Maybe it will make sense as I continue, but it seems out of place and it was a pretty interesting jump directly from horses on the playground to a school dance.
— May 31, 2021 03:48AM
Kendra Herlig
is 36% done
*** SPOILER ALERT ** The dog told me? Talking to ghosts? If you’re going to write that it has to be done well. It isn’t.
— May 29, 2021 05:10AM
Kendra Herlig
is 38% done
These stories (Pixie and Thomas) don’t intertwine at all. They’re just from the same place and know each other.
— May 29, 2021 05:09AM
