Wolfram-Jaymes Keesing’s Reviews > Common Ground > Status Update
Wolfram-Jaymes Keesing
is on page 268 of 432
I don't think this book's for me. There's little change in narration between 13yo Stan and adult Charlie—as though they both thought and spoke the same. And the novel needed more editing, with too many wild syntactical errors interrupting the story. I'll finish, but...
— May 12, 2021 05:59AM
Like flag

