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is 10% done
His lips peeled back in a feral snarl as his gaze lifted to mine.
Lips peeled back?
Peeled back?
PEELED BACK.
ARE YOU SERIOUS?
What? Is it a banana or something?
I — I just can’t 😭
— May 09, 2021 10:55AM
Lips peeled back?
Peeled back?
PEELED BACK.
ARE YOU SERIOUS?
What? Is it a banana or something?
I — I just can’t 😭
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B
is finished
I’m done.
I should be rejoicing right now but all I feel is numbness and regret at wasted time.
Full ellipses list will be up soon.
Huge rant review incoming.
This was worse than the betrothed.
0.25 stars
— May 30, 2021 10:43AM
I should be rejoicing right now but all I feel is numbness and regret at wasted time.
Full ellipses list will be up soon.
Huge rant review incoming.
This was worse than the betrothed.
0.25 stars
B
is 90% done
“Are you suggesting that she’s…”
and stopped…on my
after…tasting
Part…part
I don’t have…the
That he was saying…
*ch 41*
— May 30, 2021 10:42AM
and stopped…on my
after…tasting
Part…part
I don’t have…the
That he was saying…
*ch 41*
B
is 90% done
with the last one…
It had to be…it had
I guess I’m…”
“You’re…there’s something”
Just…speculation.
and I saw…
now…now he was here
“He’s…he’s still”
“How…how long”
*ch 41*
— May 30, 2021 10:36AM
It had to be…it had
I guess I’m…”
“You’re…there’s something”
Just…speculation.
and I saw…
now…now he was here
“He’s…he’s still”
“How…how long”
*ch 41*
B
is 90% done
Just…confusion.
“I don’t…I don’t understand,”
I couldn’t even…cheat.
it was like…I don’t know.
but I…I lost sight
“You’re…not mad?”
from…from you
“and…”
Because...because
“You can smell…?”
and…and his
it had…
But…
but Ian…
then…what?
and he…
What the…?
“then he’d be…intrigued.”
*ch 40*
— May 30, 2021 10:26AM
“I don’t…I don’t understand,”
I couldn’t even…cheat.
it was like…I don’t know.
but I…I lost sight
“You’re…not mad?”
from…from you
“and…”
Because...because
“You can smell…?”
and…and his
it had…
But…
but Ian…
then…what?
and he…
What the…?
“then he’d be…intrigued.”
*ch 40*
B
is 90% done
His words…they should infuriate me,
but I…I wanted,
and thinking was…well
was such a…tender
What I felt was…it was messy and raw
and…I didn’t
“They…they wanted me dead,”
less…floaty and
me…what are you
[spoier] … [spoiler] said
Lady Everton….
we…the night
pain…the pain
I…I loved
things…spun
Was he…was
come afterward…
“I know what you want, but…”
“I…I don’t know what to do.”
*ch 39*
— May 30, 2021 10:16AM
but I…I wanted,
and thinking was…well
was such a…tender
What I felt was…it was messy and raw
and…I didn’t
“They…they wanted me dead,”
less…floaty and
me…what are you
[spoier] … [spoiler] said
Lady Everton….
we…the night
pain…the pain
I…I loved
things…spun
Was he…was
come afterward…
“I know what you want, but…”
“I…I don’t know what to do.”
*ch 39*
B
is 90% done
He couldn’t mean…
rather…die
The smell…it
How…how could
What…what was he doing?
his eyes…I still couldn’t
taste…it was like
blood…it was
My chest…it’s not.
“I feel…different.”
“body…isn’t attached.”
“That…that is unbelievable,”
“There’s…there’s no”
blood…it’s
can…compel
“How…how would”
less…floaty and more…weighted
“Are…[spoiler] and”
“you should…you”
*ch 38*
— May 30, 2021 10:05AM
rather…die
The smell…it
How…how could
What…what was he doing?
his eyes…I still couldn’t
taste…it was like
blood…it was
My chest…it’s not.
“I feel…different.”
“body…isn’t attached.”
“That…that is unbelievable,”
“There’s…there’s no”
blood…it’s
can…compel
“How…how would”
less…floaty and more…weighted
“Are…[spoiler] and”
“you should…you”
*ch 38*
B
is 90% done
“I…I was…relieved“
His right hand…it didn’t
There...were cheers
*ch 37*
— May 30, 2021 09:31AM
His right hand…it didn’t
There...were cheers
*ch 37*
B
is 90% done
“Because even though losing my hand or certain death would be terrible, I abhor the idea of having to strike a female.”
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— May 30, 2021 09:24AM
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May 09, 2021 11:05AM
lmao, banaNA?!!
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Lmaooo 😂 banana 😂
Bhavya, your dedication is tops LMAOI read this but even I couldn't commit this much!
Anna Kate wrote: "Lmaooo 😂 banana 😂"Iffat Nusaiba wrote: "lmao, banaNA?!!"
Well, that’s what I think of when I hear ‘peel’
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☆Pelumi☆ wrote: "Bhavya, your dedication is tops LMAOI read this but even I couldn't commit this much!"
Aww thankath ❤️
This is literal torture though for me 😳
I’m sorry you didn’t like it. I hope you find something else you’ll enjoy!
I'm laughing so hard lmaooo. When I read that I thought of a baboon, since they can peel their lips back XD. Could he be a baboon...?
Mango wrote: "I'm laughing so hard lmaooo. When I read that I thought of a baboon, since they can peel their lips back XD. Could he be a baboon...?"I’m glad it made you laugh.
Actually, it’s not a baboon. It’s a (view spoiler) 😳👀
I can't wait to read this book 😂😂😂
Sara L. wrote: "I can't wait to read this book 😂😂😂"Omg please no. I don’t think you’ll like it.
Check my list of ellipses here- (in the comments)
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
Still want to read it?
Or at least wait for my review, then decide... :)
A (view spoiler) peels his lips back?! A (view spoiler) PEELS HIS LIPS BACK?! WHAT KIND OF SENTENCE IS THIS?!!
Niharika wrote: "A [spoilers removed] peels his lips back?! A [spoilers removed] PEELS HIS LIPS BACK?! WHAT KIND OF SENTENCE IS THIS?!!"Exactly my point.
Sabrina wrote: "I am dead 😂😂😂😂😂":)
Bhavya wrote: "Mango wrote: "I'm laughing so hard lmaooo. When I read that I thought of a baboon, since they can peel their lips back XD. Could he be a baboon...?"I’m glad it made you laugh.
Actually, it’s not..."
What the heck-
Plot twist: He is a baboon XD jkjk
Since everyone is confused, I’ll put the full paragraph. But this actually happened! I’m not making it up.🚨🚨*SPOILER ALERT CH 7*🚨🚨
(view spoiler)
I haven’t finished the ch, so that’s there.
BUT this doesn’t excuse leaving such an odd sentence in the middle of the book. How was it overlooked?
Unfortunately, I as a reader can’t let it slide.
Mango wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mango wrote: "I'm laughing so hard lmaooo. When I read that I thought of a baboon, since they can peel their lips back XD. Could he be a baboon...?"I’m glad it made you laugh.
Act..."
That would be an amazing plot twist! Better than what I’ve got so far 👀
Bhavya wrote: "Mango wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mango wrote: "I'm laughing so hard lmaooo. When I read that I thought of a baboon, since they can peel their lips back XD. Could he be a baboon...?"I’m glad it made y..."
AHAHA omgg if only that were true 👀
Mango wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mango wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mango wrote: "I'm laughing so hard lmaooo. When I read that I thought of a baboon, since they can peel their lips back XD. Could he be a baboon...?"I’m..."
If only 😒
Yeah, I don't think that's the the author meant. I mean, what person has the ability to peel their lips back?
Bookworm Sarah wrote: "Yeah, I don't think that's the the author meant. I mean, what person has the ability to peel their lips back?"I think they meant it like a facial expression, but it’s such a poorly framed statement, like many others in this book.
I provided spars for full context, but I just don’t like how the sentence was framed.
Girl peeled from WHAT? What were they stuck to???
♚sari♚ wrote: "Girl peeled from WHAT? What were they stuck to???"I assume pressed together in a thin line? 🤔
So he ‘peeled it’ and made an expression.
I HAVENT READ THIS YET BUT THIS COMMENT IS EVERYTHING
Claudia wrote: "I HAVENT READ THIS YET BUT THIS COMMENT IS EVERYTHING":)
OMG🤣🤣🤣🤣
i think this might just be the worst sentence i've read all yearpeeled back!?!?!?
Orla wrote: "i think this might just be the worst sentence i've read all yearpeeled back!?!?!?"
Exactly 😒🤭
This is my most liked status update 🤭😳I am in shock.
Lol, I think you'll like this book more if you don't analyse every sentence. Some of the phrases are definitely weird xD.
Booklover wrote: "Lol, I think you'll like this book more if you don't analyse every sentence. Some of the phrases are definitely weird xD."Maybe, but I’m kind of used to analysing sentences this way so I can’t help but notice such stuff...
Bhavya wrote: "Booklover wrote: "Lol, I think you'll like this book more if you don't analyse every sentence. Some of the phrases are definitely weird xD."Maybe, but I’m kind of used to analysing sentences this..."
Then good luck :)
Booklover wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Booklover wrote: "Lol, I think you'll like this book more if you don't analyse every sentence. Some of the phrases are definitely weird xD."Maybe, but I’m kind of used to analysing..."
Thanks. :)
Omg this almost has 100 likes 😳Some of my reviews also don’t have that many...
Thanks everyone. I’m glad you’ll liked this ❤️
Lucille wrote: "Does he have a muzzle or something? 🤣"😬
JSHFJSDGFSDFGSDUKFG I-i still haven't read the books but this is too funny lmfaOklsdhfuisdh
iris :) wrote: "He's a bAnAnA-"He is 👀
iris :) wrote: "He's a bAnAnA-"😂😂
Nashita wrote: "iris :) wrote: "He's a bAnAnA-"😂😂"
:)
OMG Please keep posting! This is amazing
Tiff wrote: "OMG Please keep posting! This is amazing"Thank you. :)
Thought I should let you’ll know I finished the book a while back. A huge rant incoming 👀
I still don’t know why this update has so many likes 👀
