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Richard
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Why no tilde on señor/señorita? And --- instead of em-dash... But has smart-quotes everywhere.
— Dec 25, 2013 09:43PM
Richard
is 8% done
Needs some copy-edit, mainly punctuation in Ch 1-2... so far. Prose is well formed, except for some lay/lie distinction problems.
— Dec 15, 2013 09:58PM

