Jen_C’s Reviews > I Take Thee to Deceive > Status Update
Jen_C
is 66% done
I like the story but the style is a bit wordy & overly detailed. I really wish that I could have Nate's POV too. What is going on in his head?
— Dec 03, 2013 06:19AM
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Jen_C
is 66% done
Grow a freakin backbone & tell them you aren't going back to see that shrink if you don't want to. Also, I could totally do without the play-by-play of your boring day. Zzzzzzzzz.
— Dec 03, 2013 03:23PM
