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I hate how sometimes you can tell a book is written by an older white dude and you just hit these speed bumps of cringe metaphor and awkward statements.
Otherwise a good book. But odd pockets of cringe. Women as objects in one small part. Too much love for Churchill... etc.
— Mar 20, 2021 11:18PM
Otherwise a good book. But odd pockets of cringe. Women as objects in one small part. Too much love for Churchill... etc.