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OMG. is this Dan Brown writing under a pseudonym? The writing is absolutely horrible. Where in god’s name is the editor? For instance:
“Well,” Ginzberg said, pleased that Dominic had asked the question,”
Really? Does the author not realize that he did not have to tell the reader, it could have shown this emotion?
— Mar 21, 2021 10:50AM
“Well,” Ginzberg said, pleased that Dominic had asked the question,”
Really? Does the author not realize that he did not have to tell the reader, it could have shown this emotion?
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