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Lydia
is 30% done
So the author has decent knowledge about military and where the main medical hospitals are, but then he uses the term "bad guy" in a story. Not insurgent or other terms, but "bad guy" it just sounds silly in context.
— Mar 09, 2021 09:36AM
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Lydia
is 50% done
OK a military Dr. smoking, fine, whatever. But then he offers it to her, who he KNOWS is PREGNANT. so many WTF's
— Mar 09, 2021 10:50AM
Lydia
is 31% done
There are parts of this story that I don't understand why they are part of the story, they don't add to the progression of the story line, like the fight the Hero has with the nurse and then she resign
And then the bar hook-up he has. He has not met the main Female but still these moments feel unnecessary.
— Mar 09, 2021 09:44AM
And then the bar hook-up he has. He has not met the main Female but still these moments feel unnecessary.
