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started beta read #2 of the first part of this book. I got there evetnually Graeme :p
— Mar 04, 2021 02:44AM
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Nick
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Currently reading the full beta read with Castle Dracula group. Looking forward to jumping back into the fray Graeme!
— Sep 07, 2021 02:00AM
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A great new part to the story but i have only one question. If all this happens so early on what the hell is in store for us in the rest? So much happens its a non stop action fest but the story is so varied between the past the long distant past and catching back up the current events. Great stuff as always and I really need you to write faster now Graeme you tease!
— Mar 05, 2021 01:26AM
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Sent you a fresh beta with the latest corrections.
Oh damn just finished the old one this morning thanks.
Any major structural changes or just spelling/grammar etc?
Spelling, grammar edits, some work on the L&J meeting in Ch 1.Some key changes in ch 6 - especially the first scene with Crane.
There's a kinda bombshell admission/revelation which I only realised a couple of weeks ago. Total 🤦♂️🤦♂️ series wide plot hole ... now plugged.
Nice ill re-read it through then. Thanks
The L& J meetup in Ch 1, from L's first scene forward.Ch6. First and Last scene.
