Jackson’s Reviews > Pines > Status Update

"staring out the rain beaded glass as the rain forest streaked past in dark greens." i really like this sentence because i can imagine myself in the car watching as the rain is coming down the window and watching trees go by.

our main character was walking down the street when the was a call for help and there was a woman knelt over a man on the ground who is sick.

the main character is still back tracking and trying to find out more clues about him and there is now an old house and its very broken down and rusty

i like the story plot and character development because at the start you have no idea who he is and you have to try and piece together who he is and who he can trust.