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Yet another UF where the author seems to equate cursing with grittiness. Cursing isn't world building, authors. I find it so grating, and I swear like a sailor.
— Oct 24, 2013 05:21AM
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Ibrium
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"He'd done that to himself for her? To heal her injury?
Whatever. It didn't mean anything."
She's also ungrateful and insufferable. JESUSAGE.
— Oct 25, 2013 09:43AM
Whatever. It didn't mean anything."
She's also ungrateful and insufferable. JESUSAGE.
Ibrium
is 37% done
"You still believe in God? After what they did to you? Falling to earth and all that?" I don't think the author understands how belief works. Or non-belief, for that matter. These seem like concepts she needed a better grasp on before trying to tackle.
— Oct 25, 2013 07:54AM
