Olya’s Reviews > Trail of Lightning > Status Update
Olya
is 50% done
this has flaws but i am still liking it much better than stuff i have read in the past.
the romantic plot isn’t very subtly done so far, altho kai is a more interesting love interest than most YA boys (despite what the name might suggest).
there’s smth a bit lonely ab the book given the only two developed characters so far are kai & maggie, & maggie just isn’t super compelling. i like coyote a lot tho.
— Jan 19, 2021 07:23PM
the romantic plot isn’t very subtly done so far, altho kai is a more interesting love interest than most YA boys (despite what the name might suggest).
there’s smth a bit lonely ab the book given the only two developed characters so far are kai & maggie, & maggie just isn’t super compelling. i like coyote a lot tho.
1 like · Like flag
Olya’s Previous Updates
Olya
is starting
immediately way more promising than virtually every YA/SFF novel i’ve read in 2020. happy new year to me! :*)
— Jan 01, 2021 08:36PM
