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Holly
is on page 22 of 336
Finished chapter one. It's not getting any better for me yet. One scene there were 2 vamps Christopher and Justin...then all the sudden in dialogue it reads, Kit said...who the heck is Kit? Did I miss something. Finally figured out it had to be Christopher's nickname.
— Aug 15, 2010 08:56AM
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Holly
is on page 230 of 336
I put the book down as I didn't care enough about the characters or the story
— Dec 31, 2010 12:29PM
Holly
is on page 230 of 336
despite the very poor proofing of this book, the story is almost there and I want to see how it ends
— Sep 27, 2010 07:36AM
Holly
is on page 153 of 336
this book continues to be annoying with the constant typos it amazes me that it went to print this way. Names change, words omitted etc
— Sep 06, 2010 06:27AM
Holly
is on page 90 of 336
the story is all over the place and the writing and and all makes me wonder if the book was self published..there are MANY mistakes!!
— Aug 27, 2010 08:25AM
Holly
is on page 8 of 336
so far i have noted some very cheesy writing, it is a romance novel so maybe i shouldn't be surprised
— Aug 10, 2010 07:49AM
