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Story is interesting but I've already come across at least 3 mistakes. So frustrating. I'm pretty sure his friend's laughter was supposed to be maniacal and not manacle...but what do I know? At least it was the very first sentence, cuz I just read one that that happened in. *sigh* editoreditoreditor or you know, maybe just a re-read of it yourself? grrr
— Oct 03, 2013 12:30AM
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Riayl
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er, WASN'T the first sentence...I'm obviously too tired to be reading. Or typing.
— Oct 03, 2013 01:51AM
