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Pete
is finished
that was a bore to read.....I don't mind sex being mentioned.... but the bombarding with sex scenes and the f...word was just annoying...story line itself is good but the way it played out was no bueno....book could have been written in half the amount of words...dragging out some events over 50-80 pages is retarded
DID NOT LIKE THE WRITING..I bet a different author could have made it interesting
— Jan 10, 2021 08:52AM
DID NOT LIKE THE WRITING..I bet a different author could have made it interesting
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Pete
is finished
that was a bore to read.....i love sex and i do say sometime sh.... but the bombarding with sex scenes and the f...word was just annoying...story line itself is good but the way it played out was no bueno....book could have been written in half the amount of words...dragging out some events over 50-80 pages is retarded
DID NOT LIKE THE WRITING
— Jan 10, 2021 08:50AM
DID NOT LIKE THE WRITING
