mace’s Reviews > The Prince and the Thief > Status Update
mace
is 25% done
this book definitely needs a lot more editing. there are glaring inconsistencies regarding the age of a main character and there is overabundant info-dumping all over the place. a character should not spend a whole page telling the reader everything there is to know about all his siblings.
— Jan 06, 2021 02:53PM
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