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Some of the action verbs were kicked, walking, digs, and humming. Some sensory details I found were "booms through his bullhorn", "Darby makes a juicy noice with his spit", and "like the hum of a radio gone haywire". Some colorful modifiers were twitching, precious, confident and commanding, and juicy. These made the book more exciting and interesting, and helped me understand what was going on.