Melanie’s Reviews > Hellhole: An Anthology of Subterranean Terror > Status Update
Melanie
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Black Lung - Aaron Sterns - 3 stars. I loved the Lovecraftian ideas in here, I just wish the editing of this one was better. Too many 'clunky' sentences and tense changes within paragraphs kept pulling me out of the narrative.
— Dec 04, 2020 11:31PM
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Melanie
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Ghosts of Hyperia - Jessica Mchugh - DNF - The writing was fine but not a single likeable character so I can't be bothered.
— Dec 09, 2020 09:53AM
Melanie
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Ginormous Hell Snake - Jack Bible - 2.5 stars. Fun banter between the main characters but a wee bit predictable and cliched. I'm pretty sure not all native peoples of South American jungles are monster-worshipping cannibals.
— Dec 07, 2020 09:33AM
Melanie
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The Offspring - J.H Moncrieff - 2 stars. I was a bit disappointed with this one, it felt too rushed and didn't really flow or make much sense.
— Nov 30, 2020 01:26AM
Melanie
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Guard Duty, S.D. Perry - 4 stars, Lovecraftian Elder Gods breaking through the to wreck havoc - I love it.
— Oct 05, 2020 01:25AM
Melanie
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Where the Sun Does not Shine - Paul Mannering - 5 stars. "Tremors" meets "The Martian" What could possibly go wrong?🌚🦠🤣
— Sep 30, 2020 03:06AM
Melanie
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A Plague of Locusts - Michael McBride - 5 stars. The army should not fuck with genetic modification.
— Aug 30, 2020 12:51AM
