Sly Robakowski’s Reviews > Robot Raiders > Status Update

Action verbs,he bowed in front of me,the general waved a pudgy hand.Sensory details,foul smelling cigar.Colorful modifiers,Dr.Ronald was tall,rangy,in his late thirties,with rust-colored hair,an expressive clown face,and a childish sense of humor to match

This helped me to get to know the characters better and more details in the story.