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Emma
is 10% done
The writing style is sooo long-winded. So much internal repetitive dialogue. And Foster’s breakup doesn’t make sense. Neither were in love with each other and yet she decided to go the pissed-off route and take all their money and belongings? And he let her, even though she was the one who cheated? It doesn’t make sense. What a doormat.
— Oct 17, 2020 01:53AM
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Emma
is 72% done
“[...] and that he didn’t take my heart with him when it was finally over.” So neither of them seem to be expecting their relationship to last when it’s barely even started. How romantic.
— Oct 18, 2020 11:44AM
Emma
is 60% done
Made up doubts (that are getting far-fetched) are so boring... Stellan’s full of them. Then again, there’s no actual plot of this book anymore, so I suppose they had to make do.
— Oct 18, 2020 06:13AM
Emma
is 41% done
Overlapping POVs! The bane of my existence. Why can’t we just jump to continue the scene where we were? Why go back to earlier in the day? Ugh. Is this the author’s first novel or something? At least the story has improved...
— Oct 17, 2020 10:48AM
