Ali’s Reviews > Gluten for Punishment > Status Update

I just couldn't finish this book. It was mentally exhausted. I was mired in dislike. I just didn't like Toni. I just don't like the characters. I didn't like her constant "I don't want a man. Wow! He's hot." Also, why did everyone have blue eyes and why did the author feel the need to tell us? Either way it seems clear she really likes blue eyes. It's been about 3 months the time to quit has come and gone.

Who was the editor? Pretentious Paul? No one actual says, "I gave you a generous amount of cream." Also, no one says, "I have my cell phone should I get into trouble." You know what else? They don't use the word several when a bunch, tons, loads, some, a few, or a couple would do. Finally, what kind of woman says they don't ask men out because it sets the tone for the relationship? What does that even mean!? GRUMBLE!