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Andrew Benesh
is 99% done
Done! I love how the authorv beyond things together in the last few chapters to highlight what was brewing all along. I still wish we got more Augie, and wish we saw more of Dean's successes. Kaui's ending was brilliant, and Malia's feels bittersweet. All in all, this was fantastic.
— Oct 05, 2020 07:26AM
Andrew Benesh
is 20% done
In general this is good, but I feel like Augie isn't badly as developed as the other characters. The tension building and developmental perspective work is excellent. The writing feels like it edges on being stream of consciousness, which really propels things.
— Sep 27, 2020 06:16AM

