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The cover art is lovely.
There have been a few great lines...but there is no variation in tone or syntax so I almost feel like I'm reading the dry reports Dickinson recieved about his stool samples. There is no emotion and I feel like the intersection of physiology, biology, the environment, etc should and would have important things to say in a stark and urgent way. Instead, he turned reports into poetry.
— Sep 16, 2020 10:40AM
There have been a few great lines...but there is no variation in tone or syntax so I almost feel like I'm reading the dry reports Dickinson recieved about his stool samples. There is no emotion and I feel like the intersection of physiology, biology, the environment, etc should and would have important things to say in a stark and urgent way. Instead, he turned reports into poetry.
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