Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)’s Reviews > Alburquerque > Status Update

I could have read more on these characters. What a story now I understand where the story was going I almost thought the loose ends wouldn't be tied up but they were in the very last pages. WOW what a story...

Wow what a chapter... that was intense...

That could have ended bad. Good thing they were not looking for a fight...

Now the story is coming back to the real plot from the beginning....So many things coming together now...

Man that was a long chapter could have easily have been 3 chapters for all the split stories that were told. I feel like it moved away from the actual story in the beginning I don't understand why all the politics took over it makes no sense for the story line.

That was one long chapter turned poem reciting...

Ouch what a chapter I hope things get better from this point...I don't want them to be apart...

It went off topic again but pulled a little twist that kept me reading that ending to this chapter I didn't see that coming that was intense...

What did that chapter have to do with anything...on with the story...

This chapter dragged a little but they found a few things just not all they were looking for.