Timothy Baldwin’s Reviews > The Chair Man: A thriller in which a victim of a terrorist attack wreaks vengeance from his wheelchair > Status Update
Timothy Baldwin
is 60% done
I wouldn't exactly call this a thriller. Not with all the scenes that seemingly add nothing to the story. I feel like the author has tried to do too much and now we are meandering with very little conflict driving the plot.
— Aug 11, 2020 05:01PM
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Timothy Baldwin
is 80% done
I'm of the mind that a story shouldn't be bogged down by too many branches off the main plot. This story reads more like a collection of loosely connected short stories sprinkled with unnecessary scenes. For example, I read a short chapter which depicted an autistic boy unbeknownst to to him, acting as carrier for a shady mail delivery service. Unless this boy shows up again, this deviation could've been cut out.
— Aug 17, 2020 06:30AM
Timothy Baldwin
is 17% done
Not sure how I feel about this one yet...
It seems to be setting itself up for a major conflict between the two characters who are being developed: the victim of a terrorist attack and a would be recruit to a terrorist organization.
— Jul 24, 2020 09:45AM
It seems to be setting itself up for a major conflict between the two characters who are being developed: the victim of a terrorist attack and a would be recruit to a terrorist organization.
